Chapter : 7

Revenge Fantasy

“Hey Diya!” Edwin said with a wicked smile.

But instead of replying, I continuously coughed hard because of the puff of smoke I inhaled. I’ve already started panicking. I feared I was gonna lose this golden opportunity for my long-awaited revenge fantasy by being so clumsy and confused.

“How have you been? Loved how you look in that pink lehenga. Reminded me of how beautiful you were”

I swear at that moment that I wanted to punch him through the phone. How dare he talk to me like this? I was pretty shocked to see his audacity again to act all friendly and cool all of a sudden. I was short of words and was just panting hard for a couple of seconds, confused about how to respond. I felt like I was losing this battle.

“Hi Edwin, I’m Shankar. Nice to meet you”

I was surprised to hear this. Shankar came to my rescue. His rusty voice and confidence overpowered Edwin’s voice. Did I seem that disappointed that he needed to step in? Anyway I couldn’t be happier. In fact, the sheer boldness to take charge of the situation turned me on. Maybe it was his maturity which was lacking in most of the guys in my past relationships.  As soon as I heard this, my confidence rushed back into me. 

“Hey Edwin, Good to see you. How is your lonely life?” I could see his pupils dilate at my reply. He was rattled and I was loving every moment of it. 

“What?… Hey Diya…I know you are really pissed at me..” He stammered.
“It’s so sad that you are still hung up on me, Edwin” I gave a smirk. That reply shook him to his core. He was flustered. “Anyway, as you can see, I’ve moved on. You’ve already met Shankar”

“You are joking, right? That dude is your new boyfriend? You can’t just move on from me that easily. This is just a sham to get back at me”.

Then Shankar took a big puff of smoke and exhaled onto the phone. For a second, the video was completely foggy from the smoke. That was such a power move and I could see the fear in Edwin’s eyes.
When Shankar took another puff, I turned to his face and reached to his lips. He got the cue quickly and we did a smoke-kiss. This time I didn’t cough and instead I stylishly exhaled thick smoke, turning back to the camera in swag.

“Hey, did you just kiss him?” Edwin was getting angrier. I got so thrilled at everything about this.
“No”. I smirked. “It was just a smoke kiss… Hold on, we’ll just show you what’s a proper kiss, right now” I don’t know what possessed me to say that so soon.

And with an anxious restless heart I opened my mouth half, naughtily and moved closer to Shankar’s. He too slowly and teasingly opened his mouth and captured my lips with his. Yes, we passionately and deeply got engaged in a proper seductive serene french kiss! The way his lips were brushing mine was too sensual and was really turning me on again. Chilly wetness of the just washed prickly bristles of his mustache and the stubble was tingling and wetting all around my mouth, on my cheeks, chin and nose, while warm and smelly breath from inside his mouth was conquering my senses. I was involuntarily playing with my fingers on the hairs behind his head. His left arm was around my waist, which was not seen in the camera, but still he was caressing me all over there sensually. Edwin kept trying to interrupt it, asking me to wait and give him attention. But I was instead moaning and getting my heart melt from the wet, soft, warm and sensual caresses from his tongue to mine. At that moment I knew perfectly well that Shankar was also equally excited, from the way he was kissing me. That was my first proper kiss ever with Shankar which was much better than all the stupid kisses I ever had.


“Are you kidding me?” Edwin screamed. His face was now turning red. “How long do you think you can continue this charade? I know exactly where you are”. That came as a surprise to me. I was hoping by then he would have ended the call and left, but his words made me concerned. 

I pretended to ignore those words and kept kissing him. But Shankar sensed the sudden change in me, and broke the kiss. So I had to turn back to Edwin.

“Come on now Edwin. Don’t start being so pathetic.” I tried to look confident.

“You are probably at a resort in Shimla, you came there for your brother’s wedding, which is happening tomorrow” Edwin responded with a grin. He seemed not drunk at all.

I was honestly surprised by the fact he knew so much about my situation right then. My heart stopped beating for a second.

“So what? What the hell do you want now?” I sounded desperate.

“Don’t give me that babe.. I have known you for years. You don’t mess around with an older guy like him. And.. even if you did that out of, maybe, desperation (he chuckled).. You know.. But still you won’t be bringing your sex mate who is as elder as your dad to your brother’s wedding… And this must be a cheap drama you pulled off instantly to piss me off.. as revenge may be.. Am I right, loser?”

He had caught me red-handed. I felt like I lost my voice. He must have already spoken to my friends and gathered information about my whereabouts. After all, the post on Instagram must have already had my location on it. Shankar sensed my panic. He caressed my back with his left hand over the top. But I noticed that it was not seen on the screen. Maybe he was not pretending before him and did it to genuinely console me, I assumed.

I was back to square one again. Edwin knowing so much about me, was not something I anticipated and it completely caught me off hand. “Hey kid”, Shankar interrupted.  And then he took another big puff of smoke. I knew then that something was about to happen. I felt a sense of relief and anxiety.
He exhaled his smoke. “Do you still think you can get back with her?”.  He was a savior again. How does he read me so well?  Maybe this time it was more obvious. I was shaking my legs with anxiety. Luckily Edwin couldn’t see it. But then something happened. Shankar slipped his left arm inside my top, and started slowly caressing the skin on my back. I was shocked. How can Shankar do this while having a conversation with a stranger with ease? His warm fingers calmed me down and my legs started to feel more relaxed. Now it wasn’t the legs that I was worried about. His warm fingers gently gracing my skin were starting to turn me on. I was embarrassed to know how hot it made me feel. In a few moments, I knew my body would react to his touch and it did. Goosebumps. His fingers stopped for a moment. He knew what I felt. My face was starting to turn red and his smile didn’t help at all. He started caressing again. Only this time, the feeling got more intense. His rugged fingers now on my bumpy skin was something hard to resist. Pleasure ran down my spine.

“What the fuck do you want? What the fuck do you know about me or us?” Edwin was in a rage. I was getting really anxious thinking if this whole idea was a mistake. I already regretted unnecessarily dragging Shankar into this nasty mess.

“There is no reason to be so hostile, Edwin. I consider both of us to be adults here. Or am I making a mistake to see you as one” Shankar kept his calm. I was thrilled to see the confidence and command he maintained in his tone, all this while almost feeling me up by caressing my back with the soft magical touches of his long fingers..

Edwin grunted in disapproval. I could see his confidence take a big hit.

“I appreciate how much effort you have put into finding your ex-girlfriend’s whereabouts. Bravo. Although just one look at that picture and you can guess where she is. That’s all you got?” And then looking at me he said. “And that’s supposed to scare her?” He ran his right hand over my left cheek. I started to blush again.

Shankar was totally taking control of the whole conversation, while he was caressing my whole back from bottom to top until my neck, now with his whole arm inside my top. My hands started playing with his hair involuntarily. 

“Well.. ” he stammered. “I still don’t think she would go for a dadaji (old man) like you.” hoping to make fun of Shankar. Shankar remained unfazed. In fact, I felt he wanted Edwin to get desperate.

“What time is it now kid ?” He exhaled another puff of smoke. 

“What the hell does that have to do with anything?” Edwin retorted. “Now the kid can’t tell time“ Shanker responded looking at me. He was literally assuming all the power over Edwin.

“I don’t know. I guess it’s half past 11” Edwin has become completely submissive answering that question. I was sitting on Shankar’s lap comfortably, and getting sensually caressed by him on my whole back and back neck, which kept me moving and turning around softly. That is when he, with his other hand, caught the bottom tip of my top at my front and then slowly lifted it until almost my whole midriff was open which left me breathless and anticipating hard about his next move on my stomach.

“Good job” said Shankar in a condescending tone and then he slowly brought his arms towards my open stomach with his palm and fingers facing upwards, except his forefinger which was kept straight towards me, and he softly placed his pointed forefinger just below my navel. I suddenly closed my eyes and took in the air loud, out of shock and the sensation it created. Even though my belly shrunk a lot , his finger didn’t lose the touch with my underbelly. I started gasping hard which made my belly shrunk and expanded massively. All the while he kept caressing my waist slowly up and down with the fingers of his left hand.

“What do you think your pappa will be doing right now?” Shankar asked without even looking at him, all his eyes were glued to my stomach then.

“What???” Apparently Edwin didn’t expect this question since he was also kind of eagerly watching and possibly enjoying Shankar’s actions on my body.
“Why are you bringing my father into this?” Edwin was almost pleading..

Shankar looked at Edwin and said “No disrespect intended to him. Just curious what he will be doing at this point of time, son”

Shankar turned his face back from Edwin to my belly and started softly circling around my navel with this forefinger. I started moaning to it before his finger reached just above my navel. My heavy gasping made my belly slowly undulate like a belly dancer. I involuntarily channelized my pressure partially back to Shankar by pulling off his hair from the back of his head with my right hand.

“Still haven’t got an answer?” Shankar asked again in a stern tone.

Edwin gulped and said “Umm…Probably sleeping”

“Most likely” 

After completing making a single circle around my navel with his finger he started dragging it softly upwards through my belly. This time he took another big puff of smoke. Why am I getting turned on by seeing him smoking? I couldn’t blame myself anyway. Every time he did it, something exciting happened. This time he started to move his lips down towards my navel. I was writhing with anticipation. I arched myself backwards for his lips to savor me. But his mouth stopped before reaching it. He then exhaled his smoke onto my navel. The hot air from his mouth entered deep inside my navel. It was a sensation that I have never felt before. It felt like I was being pleasured all around the navel simultaneously.  My feet were stretched out and my stomach was tucked in with pleasure. My eyes rolled back and the feeling was taking me all over. He felt how stretched my whole body was and so his left hand tightened his grip on my waist. How could his weakness be my weakness too? 

Shanker now looked at the wide gazed Edwin. Apparently he was liking it too. I felt so enthused knowing that my revenge was nearing perfection. I was drunk with power at the feeling of Shankar on my side.


He continued “By this time of the night, he would be totally off… right?” His fingers started playing with my navel again. He broke the touch when his finger was just about to lose my skin and touch the lifted top of mine. And then touched again there and dragged back his finger downwards on my belly. I moaned again. I’ve started undulating my belly again.

“Yeah he must be” Edwin sounded emotionless.

“Okay beta, now answer this” When Shankar’s forefinger almost reached back at my navel, he opened his palm and with all the five fingers he covered my navel and started sensually tickling with each finger all around my navel. That made me release a screeching voice and stretch myself backwards and I tried keeping my stomach as hard and tight as possible to endure the tickle…

Shankar suddenly faced back at Edwin and asked, “What do you think of me?” 

Eh?… Edwin was completely clueless about it.

 Shankar quickly pulled me closer with both his hands, which made me lean towards him and my face reached quite near to his..

“Don’t be shy” Shankar turned towards Edwin.

“What do I think of you? Well..” Edwin sounded like a school kid.

“Don’t disappoint me son…” Shankar brought his forefinger to my chin and lifted my chin upwards. I stretched my neck alone backwards but leaning my body towards Shankar. He drew a slow and smooth line with the finger downwards throughout my neckline.

“You said something before. Right?”

“That you are a dadaji (old man)”. Edwin’s voice broke in between.

Shankar ignored Edwin and brought his face closer to my neck and slowly opened his mouth and pulled out his tongue and started sensually snaking with the wet tip of his tongue on the side of my neck from bottom to top real slowly. That was a profoundly intense lick and almost instantly made me melt down and moan like anything. I tilted my head accordingly as his tongue was reaching up my chin by giving him more open space on my neck. 

After watching all these for a few seconds Edwin pulled him together for a moment, got back to reality and shouted “Hey excuse me… !“

It must be really hard for him to watch it all.  He couldn’t stand watching someone else so easily pleasuring and seducing me instantly like anything. At that moment, he might have had flashes of memories of me pointlessly explaining to him about how all he should have focussed on my erogenous spots like my neck, which he carelessly ignored always.

Meanwhile, the tip of Shankar’s tongue had almost reached my chin, so when Edwin interrupted him, he broke the lick and laughed at Edwin…

“Do you think your father can ever be with a girl as beautiful and young as Diya in the cold chilly nights of Shimla?”

Shankar smiled and faced me. I tilted my head sideways again and gave him my open neck as before, I was so horny then. Watching me doing it, he smiled and then resumed the lick from my chin moving the tip of his tongue down towards my neck again. When his tongue reached the edge where my jaw joined the neck, he flicked his tongue quickly over that line for a few seconds. That was the point where I broke out chuckling unexpectedly for a second, but still kept my posture unmoved for him to do whatever he pleased on my neck. The pitch of my moaning increased as his tongue was slowly moving down and reaching to the bottom of my neck. I have already started wetting my panty, even before he finished that lick! I scratched his bare back with my fingernails out of immense pleasure. Just when the tip of his tongue reached my clavicle, he ended the lick by wrapping his lips over my neck and sucking the skin with a massive moan. His moaning while sucking my neck was another legit turn-on for me. He snuggled his face over the line of the edge where my neck joins my shoulders. He also flicked his tongue again inside his mouth up and down my shoulder bone.

Edwin was witnessing all this when Shankar suddenly ended the kiss and turned back at him to ask “Can he?”

Edwin must be boiling inside, he couldn’t say anything then I guess. He kept mum. After smiling at Edwin for a few seconds, Shankar faced back and rubbed his nose over my shoulders for a few seconds and again turned back at Edwin to say “Seems like I’m not the dadaji you thought I was”.

“And tell me why are you calling your ex-girlfriend on a weekend? Don’t you have some friends to hang around with and have fun? Or is it that, just like your papa, you are sleepy as well?” That broke Edwin down. This time his head slightly drooped. 

“It seems like we are finally on the same page” His tongue almost reached my earlobe and I didn’t even realize it. The pleasure of seeing my ex getting humiliated by Shankar was the only intention. But now the pleasure of Shankar eating me away with his mouth is the only thing that I had in my mind. But how could I let him pleasure me this much? Would he think I’m too easy? I can’t even think this through when Shankar is making my body weak with his warm mouth. He owned Edwin with just a simple conversation. I wish he owned me too.

“And.. Did you really think you had any chance of getting back with my girl when you can see how much we enjoy each other?” Shankar scoffed.

 I was so much pleased with all his words and actions till then. I hugged his head and started giving peck kisses on his cheeks and even nibbled his ears, while giggling to Edwin in between.

In a last attempt, Edwin took all his courage and said “Hey Old man, this is between me and her. I called her phone to speak with her. Not you. You don’t interfere in between.” Edwin desperately tried to get a hold on the conversation now that I was totally turned on and was kissing and biting around the ears and neck of Shankar.

“Oh wow… The kid is getting furious now… But listen, this was between you and her… a few months before until you indulged someone else into it… Not anymore… son. Besides, didn’t your father teach you how to pay respect to your elders”  and then Shankar faced towards me and sucked my lips and we again indulged in a quite passionate mouth kiss for a long while.

I don’t know how long Edwin watched us sucking each other, before getting frustrated and ending the call. It’s when Shankar broke the kiss, I realized the call had ended already.

To be Continued

So, what do you think? Please share your thoughts

  • Is this the end 😭? This story deserved another 3 chapters. Girl, I fell in love with ur writing in just a day when I started reading this story. Don’t quit writing such amazing stories. You may not recieve the response you truly deserve now, but you will get it for sure in future. 😥 I’m hoping that you would complete this story, also give an update on how many chapters have you planned for this story.

    • Thanks a lot. ive planned one more chapter for this story as a conclusion. But these days im not in a mood to write. sorry for taking so much time. Btw i also have plans to write sequel to this story keeping diya’s charecter alone.

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